A. Imperfection is destruction
B. I have been Jean because I always try to reach a certain status symbol to become satisfied with myself. I felt I needed to be the idol to everybody else in order to be happy with my own well-being. Everyday, I persuaded my friends to "improve their lives" with different and "better" methods such as Jean was criticizing Berenger. I constantly hassled my peers about responsibility and doing the right decisions in life. Yet, I was constantly late, I gave up on myself, and I did everything I was told to be against. I was so caught up in my ego that I did not notice the phase of destruction I was experiencing.
Gerald, turn that "destruction" into a specific thing: a car accident, a forest fire, a broken arm. The specificity will increase the emotional effect.
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